This
pack is really marred by low quality control.
Some of the writers are just now starting to grasp
the art,
and it shows. Grammar errors litter the pack (most
notably
the word "brung" in klu-up.lit), which is
really inexcusable
for a group that has a fair number of releases behind
it.
Veteran
writers really carried the pack through it seems,
with a great poem by Mister E. (me-1298.cia), and
two good lits by oldschooler Julian Stardawn. Eterna
also released a humorous, well-crafted poem (et-cpl~1.lit),
but her other lits were too long and diluted to sustain
alot of power.
Overall
the pack wasn't a failure, but wasn't an
overwhelming success either. A below average pack
in scope and execution with a few gems here and there,
making it worth a look.
-
argon
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Best
Lit:
me-1298.cia
Best Lit:
et-cpl~1.lit
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